Thursday, January 3, 2008

Journal Entry

Janie Sanders was sitting at the lunch table by herself. College for Janie wasn't as good as she thought it would be. She had wished she had never moved from Kansas to Florida just to go to college. She looked over her shoulder at a table full of popular girls and guys. She wished she was part of that group. The next day Janie finally made a friend, Karen. She was short, had long nappy hair, wore glasses, and she was Janies new roomate. Karen and Janie became best friends. Then the next day Stacy Renolds came up to Janie and started to chat with her. Janie thought she was dreaming because she was actually talking to the most popular girl in school. Stacy had invited Janie to her house to have a sleepover with the three most popular girls in school. At the sleepover they decided if they were goign to hangout with her in public more aften then they would have to give her an extreme makeover. They got rid of her long, tangly, frizzy, brown hair and turned it into short dark brown and light brown highlights. It looked so much better than before! They also put makeup on her even though now she looked totaly fake she felt good and happy about her self for once.

6 comments:

gracefulswan4@hotmail.com said...

I like you blog entry because you used alot of detail and it makes me want to read on.
Good Job :)
Gracie

Marina's Blog said...

Nice entry! I like it because you showed the difference between the girl before and the girl after her makeover.

raelani said...

I liked your entry because I thought you describe how the girl was feeling really well.

O Rock said...

I like your entry because you went into lots of detail, good job.

sidney said...

Hey, I like this journal entry because you really showed how they made her look better, and it was pretty descriptive. It seems like they were pretty nice and kind to be friends with her and give such an awesome hair style.

Taylor said...

nice job because i like the detail